Far Cry by John Harvey Sunday, Sep 18 2011 

John Harvey is the winner of the CWA Cartier Diamond Dagger Award, among a host of other awards and honors. Through the years Auntie M has enjoyed both his Charlie Resnick and Frank Elder series.

Now he returns with Far Cry, a story that brings every parent’s worst fear to mind.  

When two teenaged girls go off on a camping trip to Cornwall, only one will return. Heather is the daughter of Ruth and Simon, and when the girl’s body is found in in an old mine, the strain causes her parents to divorce. Each parent copes very differently; Ruth remarries and moves away and tries to start a new life. She even has another child with her new husband. Beatrice is almost same age as Heather was when she died when the unthinkable happens: Beatrice disappears.

Enter Detective Helen Walker, whose investigation takes her to Cornwall to seek a connection between Heather’s death and Beatrice’s disappearance. The officer in charge of the case, Will Grayson, fears a recently paroled child abuser has abducted Beatrice.

But as the two officers wade through the past and closely examine the present, Will becomes suspicious the person who took Beatrice knew her. A race against time begins to rescue an innocent child.

One of the pleasing  aspects of Harvey’s police procedurals is the depth he manages to give his officers, from their private lives to their professional. His characters throughout his novels are described by Marilyn Stasio of the New York Times Book Review as “defiantly alive and unruly.”

If you haven’t read a John Harvey novel, it’s not too late to discover master of the genre.

Reginald Hill: The Woodcutter Sunday, Sep 11 2011 

The Woodcutter is perhaps the sublime Reginald Hill’s most ambitious and well-plotted novel to date. With the Cumbrian landscape a definitive aspect of the novel, Hill manages to take us on a journey of lies and deceit, where love is confused with power, and only a handful of people know what truths prompt the action.

Hill goes back to his Cumbrian roots in The Woodcutter, presenting us with an unlikely hero: Wolf Hadda, son of a woodcutter, an experienced Lake District hiker and climber, who rises from his humble beginnings to the heights of successful entrepreneurship.

Wolf is living a fairy tale existence with his wife, Imogen, only child of Sir Leon and Lady Kira Ulphingstone. Wolf’s father Fred had been Sir Leon’s forestry manager. When Imogen and Wolf fall in love, the young man embarks on an odyssey to make himself worthy of her. After educating himself, gaining polish and a huge business empire, the two married and have one child, a daughter Ginny. With a private jet, a knighthood for services to commerce, and five homes, Wolf is sleeping soundly in his Holland Park home next to Imogen, when the ringing of a bell in the early morning hours changes everything he knows and has built.

With his life destroyed and everyone who loved him abandoning him, Wolf is thrown into prison under repulsive circumstances, protesting his innocence. A tragic accident disfigures him, but nothing could maim him more than the loss of his wife and child, as well as the complete and utter destruction of the life he took such pains to build.

It will take the talents of a young prison psychiatrist, Alva Ozigbo, to gain parole for the silent Wolf Hadda, but once home in Cumbria at the house his father left him, the quest for truth and revenge takes over Wolf’s life. Will Wolf figure out who set him up, and how will he react? Can Alva prevent him from being returned to prison? Does he have a chance at any kind of well-deserved future happiness?

Auntie M is a huge Hill fan, from the wonderful Andy Dalziel and Peter Pascoe series, to his delectable stand-alones. He’s won numerous awards including CWA’s Cartier Diamond Dagger Lifetime Achievement Award. This time around he has written a huge novel where each character’s flaws stand out and multiply, as the unbelievable sequence of events roll forward.

This is an intense and well-plotted book, with the threads of numerous story lines of Wolf’s history merging like a tightly-woven quilt. Ian Rankin says of Hill: “Reginald Hill’s novels are really dances to the music of time, his heroes and villains interconnecting, their stories entwining.

Don’t miss this entertaining and solidly written novel by a true master author.

New Series Additions from the UK Sunday, Sep 4 2011 

Today’s blog highlights two UK authors whose series Auntie M follows.

Stephen Booth’s Derbyshire mysteries have caught on so well that the Guardian calls him “a modern master of rural noir.” The Peak District is always well explored in terms of the dark setting, and this is evident from the opening scene in Lost River.

Detective Constable Ben Cooper is on a Bank Holiday in May when an eight-year-old girl tragically drowns and he is helpless to save her. As this event haunts him, he becomes entangled with the dead girl’s family and the secrets they hide. Was this a horrible accident or a murder? Despite being warned off, he continues to investigate, which brings consequences to his personal and professional life.

In a continuing thread, Detective Sergeant Diane Fry returns to her home town of Birmingham to face the reopening of a case that hits too close to home. The area’s inner city streets are well-drawn, as is Fry’s fraught relationships with her sister, foster parents, and people from her past she learns she can’t really trust. Fry tries to preserve herself as she digs deeply for truths that will be startling and change the way she looks at people she thought she knew.

Booth’s books are well plotted and have a rich, dark atmosphere. The taut relationship between the prickly Fry and the softer Cooper has never shone brighter.

M. R. Hall’s Jenny Cooper mysteries are rapidly gaining an audience in the US. The Redeemed is the next installment in this series that relies heavily on Hall’s knowledge as a former criminal lawyer.

Jenny is Severn Vale District Coroner, a position she fights hard to keep every day, whether she’s battling her own interior ghosts or those of outsiders who’d like her to rubber stamp death certificates. She takes her job seriously, and we  are behind her every step of the way as she battles her inner demons to find the strength to serve justice for those dead.

Hall does a fine job of explaining the differences between a criminal court and that of the Her Majesty’s Coroner, and he’s also well-versed in the debilitating anxiety and panic attacks Cooper struggles with. Her personal life is a mess: a son who spends most of his time with his father; an ex-husband whose new wife is pregnant; and a lover who needs a commitment from her, one she’s not certain she can give. She relies on pills to get her through the torment of her days and nights.

Living just over the border in Wales, that countryside is beautifully described; the area becomes a haven for Cooper in her investigation into three separate deaths. What looks like a suicide becomes more when a Jesuit priest appeals to her for help on behalf of one of  his charges, who confessed to the murder of former adult actress Eva Donaldson. Eva has become a world-renowned anti-pornography crusader. Her murder investigation was rapidly closed when a former inmate, newly out on probation, confessed to her murder.

Father Lucas Starr is not above using emotional blackmail to urge Cooper to look again at Eva’s death. When the suicide that opens the novel is joined by a second, and both were members of Eva’s politically charged charismatic Mission Church of God, Jenny starts to agree that the surface story is far from the truth.

Her inquests will ruffle feathers of the wealthy and the mighty, who use their money and position to block her at every turn. They are not above resurrecting an old family tragedy in the news, one which haunts Jenny as her memory is wiped clean for that time period. Confronting that memory puts Jenny on a fearful inner journey to confront the ghosts of her past. Using the law and her hard-won strength to continue, Jenny feels alone in her quest for the real story. Even Jenny’s court officer is unreliable in terms of support, as Alison is struggling with her husband’s infidelity.

It’s only when Father Starr brings help, just as Jenny reaches the end of her options, that she claws her way to finding the resolution the cases demand, at tremendous personal cost.

Hall’s  Jenny is a flawed woman but an appealing character. Quick to feel frustration and lash out, he manages to have her retain our sympathy and understanding, especially when the decks become stacked against her. You’ll be rooting for Jenny to survive.

 

Two Masters of Humor Sunday, Aug 28 2011 

These  are great summer reads, whether you are on the beach or sitting at home. But don’t think either of these masterful authors are just for summer, either. Both have great backlists to explore.

Alexander McCall Smith’s humorous series are always endearing yet truthful.  The second offering in the Corduroy Mansions series is The Dog Who Came in From the Cold. This series takes place in the Pimlico section of London,with Smith’s sense of setting is as firm as ever.


Pimlico terrier Freddie de la Hay lightens the life of failed oenophile William French. The breed may be made up, but French’s affection for this little dog is not. What happens when Freddie is pressed by MI6 into the service of Her Majesty’s government is just one of the delightful story threads followed in this installment, which revolves around the residents of the worn Pimlico mansion of the series title.

Berthea Snark is the psychiatrist who finds herself out of love with her own son and plotting to write his biography to set the world straight about her MP son. It’s her brother Terence who has her attention at the moment, that trusting soul whose newest infatuation is with a New Age couple who have convinced Terence his home is the preordained place for their cosmological studies. Berthea must snap into action to rout out the scammers, and how she goes about it is just one of the silly but lovable portions of the book. We also continue the story of literary agent Barbara Ragg,who has a new love in her life, and an old contract with a writer who insists he is being dictated the autobiography of a Yeti. With Barbara in Scotland, her partner, Rupert Porter, struggles to catch a look of this Yeti. “Hilarity ensues” doesn’t begin to describe Rupert’s fall from grace, but there are anchovies involved.

With his trademark wit and insights into human behavior that prove universal, it’s small wonder McCall Smith is adored in many countries.

Next up is CWA Silver, Gold and Diamond dagger winner Peter Lovesey. With stand alones and three other series, Stagestruck is the newest in his Inspector Peter Diamond series, set in Bath.

Lovesey is not afraid to take risks with his character’s lives, which I admire. In this outing, Diamond’s love life is stable for the moment. It’s his professional life that is driving him to confront his own phobia, which revolves around the theater, and which he is forced to confront when murders start to multiply at the Bath’s Theatre Royal.

Lovesey is another writer who uses his setting to enhance his novels, and we are transported to Bath and to the drama that takes place in theatre life behind the curtain. It starts when a pop diva debuts in a production designed to resurrect her failing career. With mixed feelings about her talent on stage, but great anticipation from her fans, opening night disaster strikes when she appears and within moments steps out of character and screams, clawing at her face.

Disfiguring burns, traced to her stage makeup, have ended her stage career before it began. When the makeup artist is found dead, Diamond and his team must sort through the rivalries of the cast and crew to find a murderer. Along the way, there are encounters with a theatre ghost, and the addition to Diamond’s team of a riddling detective who drives him crazy. Lovesey’s humor is at the top of his form here, but he has a knack of never letting it detract from his well-constsructed plot. The Chicago Tribune has said: “Lovesey’s books are so beautifully constructed and cleanly written that they could be used as textbooks in a crime writing course.”

On the Nickel: Maggie Toussaint Sunday, Aug 21 2011 

Auntie M has been showcasing UK authors you to investigate, and now she turns her focus to home. Georgia author Maggie Toussaint is a trained scientist who loves a good puzzle, which is why she tackles mysteries in addition to writing romantic and contemporary suspense novels.

Of interest to note is one of Toussaint’s romantic suspense novel, No Second Chance, whose proceeds benefit Day’s End Farm Horse Rescue in Lisbon, MD, which rescues horses from all over the country.

One to look for on Amazon.com or in Barnes & Noble is Toussaint’s second Cleopatra Jones novel, On the Nickel.

In For A Penny introduced single mother Cleopatra Jones an avid-but-awful golfer and competent accountant, who lives in rural Maryland and has an engaging family life. On the Nickel is the second in this series, and finds Cleo is watching over her hugely pregnant St. Bernard, two teenaged daughters, and her strong-willed mother, all while trying to contend with a new love in her life and an ex-husband who wants her back.

As if that wasn’t enough drama for any woman to handle, her mother becomes the prime suspect in a murder investigation, when Mama’s church-lady rival, Erica Hodges, is run over with a car–several times. Then Cleo finds a huge dent in Mama’s Olds, and Mama refuses to discuss her movements on the night in question.

Toussaint gets all the points right: love-able but demanding teenagers; the push from an ex wanting a second chance; the pull of an exciting new love; even the behind-the-scenes hierarchy and drama of Southern churchwomen groups.

This is perfect for summer reading, with its lighthearted, balanced storyline combining more than a hint of romance, as Cleo scrambles find the real murderer of Erica Hodges, and all before her St. Bernard delivers those puppies!

Maggie Toussaint is a member of numerous organizations including Sisters in Crime. To learn more about her and her other novels, visit: http://www.maggietousssaint.com.

Summer Two-fer: New to You? Sunday, Aug 14 2011 

Author Alison Bruce was new to Auntie M until recently. The author of two non-fiction crime books, Alison lives in Cambridgeshire with her family and turned her hand to fiction, introducing Detective Constable Gary Goodhew, the youngest, and probably brightest, detective in Cambridge’s Parkside Station. Cambridge is a wonderful setting and Bruce does it justice, using the river and its environs to jumpstart a fast-paced mystery that never lets up in her first entry, Cambridge Blue.

After an intriguing prologue, DC Goodhew is first on the scene at Midsummer Common after the body of Lorna Spence is found. Although it’s his first murder case, Goodhew quickly becomes involved, to the chagrin of his new partner, DC Michael Kincaide. Lorna was well-liked and there appears to be no motive for her murder–until a second brutal murder is committed in similar circumstances, kicking the investigation and the pacing into overdrive.

Bruce does a nice job of introducing the other characters in her plot; one who will return besides Goodhew’s partner and his DI, is his grandmother, a spry woman with a wise mind. As the investigation moves along,  Goodhew’s instincts ripen, and despite what we think we know, Bruce manages to surprise her readers with twists and more twists in this agreeable novel.

In her second outing, The Siren, Goodhew forms an unlikely alliance with a young witness. Two young women, Kimberly Guyver and Rachel Golinski have a shared past they thought they’d left behind, until it catches up with them in a startling way, leaving Rachel’s house burned down, and Kimberly’s young son, Riley, missing.

As Goodhew investigates both incidents, he uncovers conflicting stories: Kimberly is distraught but also defensive and at times seems uncooperative to him. Is this the natural result of a life lived in foster homes, suspicious of police and anyone with power, or is it born out of fear that he will find his way to the bottom of the lies she’s told him?  With the life of a young child hanging in the balance, Goodhew races to save lives and almost loses his own in the process.

Bruce does another great job of parsing out Goodhew’s back story whilst showing him maturing and evolving in his job and in his life. One device she shares with her readers is the playlist she listens to whilst writing these novels. These songs keep her company when she’s writing and for her, they “belong” to each novel. I was delighted to read this, as I work in a similar way, with certain pieces of music attaching themselves to a project as I’m writing, which become identified for me with that work and sometimes influence it.

Looking forward to seeing where Bruce takes Goodhew in Cambridge next~

Two Old Authors and A New One Sunday, Aug 7 2011 

Auntie M has already sung the praises of authors S. J. Bolton and Julia Spencer -Fleming. Here are reviews of their newest I’ve gotten my hands on, coupled with a new writer for your attention:

First, Julia S-F has hit the ground running with the latest entry in her series featuring Episcopal priest, Rev. Clare Ferguson and her sheriff lover, Chief Russ Van Alstyne. Their romance has been handled delicately through past books, and hits its stride here in One Was a Soldier.  (The title happens to be a line from one of Auntie M’s favorite hymns.)    Rev. Clare is an accomplished helicopter pilot, and has just returned from combat duty in Iraq. She finds herself one of five veterans attending a counseling group, each one carrying the baggage and problems active duty brings.  The vets struggle with drug dependency, explosive rage, brain injuries and the guilt of an in-country affair. One young track star grapples with adjusting to facing life as a double amputee. The ravaging effects of war are handled here with understanding and compassion. And then murder rears its head, and a conspiracy is feared which may affect them all. This takes place as Russ and Claire try to iron out their complicated relationship. Satisfying and complex.

Next up is Now You See Me from S. J. Bolton, whose stand-alone thrillers just keep getting stronger. Bolton’s fascination with British folklore has made all of her novels a treat for readers. This time Bolton and her protagonist, newly-minted detective Lacey Flint, take on a Jack the Ripper-like killer, hellbent on recreating some of London’s bloodiest past. The opening hooks you: seconds after interviewing a reluctant witness in a different case, Lacey finds a viciously stabbed woman hanging onto her car door. The woman has been brutally stabbed and literally dies in Lacey’s arms. This strong beginning doesn’t let up, and you will be turning pages  quickly as the murders mount, all with ties of some sort to the original Ripper killings. Once Lacey’s name is mentioned in the killer’s letter to a reporter, she becomes irrevocably linked to the investigation.

As the killer taunts Lacey with his cruel game, she comes under the close scrutiny of two members of her team: DI Dana Tulloch, reassigned from her Scotland post and carrying her own demons, and Special Ops officer DI Mark Joesbury, who finds himself assigned to guard Lacey when it becomes apparent this killer has made it personal. As the investigation heats up and the bodies start to pile up, Lacey finds too many reminders of a part of her own life she’s kept hidden from everyone who knows her, including the police force. The pacing is relentless, and even when Lacey offers herself as bait for the killer and you think you know the ending, it twists away from you on a different course. Fast-paced and riveting.

The newcomer to this grouping is A. D. Scott, living now in Australia, but raised in the Scottish Highlands. Scott uses all five senses to make the area so real it jumps off the page in her debut A Small Death in the Great Glen.

Scott deftly brings her readers into 1950’s Scotland, where WWII is still on most residents minds. That includes the varied staff of a small town newspaper who we visit in turn, and whose actions push the story forward. After his disappearance, a young boy’s body is found drowned in the canal, and when murder is decided, panic threatens to overtake the villagers.

Threads of religious intolerance, petty jealousies, and prejudices rise up against the conventions of the time as suspicion moves around. Two young girls, daughters of the paper’s typist, tell a story about seeing the boy and his actions just before his disappearance.  Joanne Ross is trying to protect her daughters even as she suffers in silence in an abusive marriage. What other choice has she in the 50’s, when her own relatives tell her this is the lot she has drawn and it is up to her to keep the marriage going for her children? The pathos of her failed relationship, her guilt, and her efforts to hide it, are seen readily by the staff she works with daily.

As the investigation into the boy’s death travels on, different characters in the area are subjected to the microscope of such a case. These include a Polish sailor who is trying for refugee status, a corrupt town clerk, and the Italian family whose daughter is Joanne’s friend, and whose cafe’ offers the first known cappuccino machine in northern Scotland.

Everyone has secrets, and none are left unturned in this fine debut novel.  Auntie M looks forward to the sequel, where many of the intriguing characters Scott has drawn will reappear.

Hot Summer Recommendation: Aline Templeton Sunday, Jul 31 2011 

Author Louise Penny, she of the multi-award winning Three Pines series and the creator of Inspector Gamache, first recommended UK author Aline Templeton, and Auntie M has been thanking her ever since.

Templeton worked in education and broadcasting, writing numerous stories for newspapers and magazines, before turning her hand to crime novels. She lives in Edinburgh with her husband and has two grown children.

Her DI Marjory Fleming series is a stand out. Here we have a woman in a hard-driven job usually given to men, constantly proving herself, while she juggles two teenagers at home. And did I mention her husband is a sheep farmer? This is a well-drawn character, a woman who readily admits cooking is not her forte` and one who would rather unwind in the evening with a dram of scotch, her old collie and her husband beside her.

Templeton does a fine job of exploring and explaining crime taking place in small, southwestern Scottish towns along the coast. The first in the series is titled Cold in the Earth, and Auntie M is still searching for a copy of it. The next, The Darkness and the Deep, was my first introduction to this readable series. The novel revolves around the Royal National Lifeboat Museum and its rescue service, where the ancient stone harbour of the port of Knockhaven becomes the setting for a most unusual murder. Centered around the  wreck of the Knockhaven lifeboat with multiple loss of life, the tragedy impact the entire community.

Then DS Tam McNee discovers this supposed accident was a deliberate act, and the hunt is on for a murderer. But who of the dead was actually the intended victim? When the case breaks, Fleming and her team plunge into the searching, routing the lives of the small town’s inhabitants who were close to the victims. In a fishing port ravaged by unemployment, even the idea of vandalism gone awry must be explored. The drug trade has taken root in the area, providing an additional area to investigate.

As Fleming’s team works hard and the town becomes hungry for justice, the pressures, both personal and professional mount. The book is well-plotted and a great read.

 

Next in the series is Lying Dead, which opens with the bludgeoned body of an attractive young woman being found in the woods after the silence of the quiet spring morning is broken by the ringing of her mobile phone. At first it appears the woman is from Manchester, and efforts to identify her start there. It will be difficult to describe more of the convoluted plot without giving too much away, but suffice it to say that you won’t be disappointed as Fleming and her team search for a canny murderer.

This time the town of Drumbreck, a few miles from Glasgow, comes into scrutiny, which it is determined the victim used to live there and still has multiple ties to the area. As much as Templeton does justice to the small towns she creates, these lovely novels are all character-driven, with entirely believable characters. Templeton takes care to never allow them to become parodies of “country folk,” and the themes she explores are universal. Here adultery is the crux of the matter, and as Fleming manages the personnel in her team, we see her in both domestic and professional modes.

 

 

 

 

The third Auntie M read is titled Lamb to the Slaughter and it opens with the tranquility of a sunny evening broken by the brutal murder of an old man, gunned down on his own doorstep. The peaceful market town of Kirkluce is locked in a bitter debate which has divided the population: whether a proposed superstore would benefit or harm the charming community. The victim would have been instrumental in passing this scheme, or not, depending on whom Fleming speaks to. Fleming and her team are investigating this murder when a dead sheep, bloodied and gored, is found abandoned in the streets. Added in are bouts of escalating vandalism which seem to be bordering on sinister aggression against an elderly woman. Are the two things connected? Then a band of teenaged bikers loom on the periphery of Fleming’s case when it hits too close to home and she finds her daughter has befriended the group.

When a second victim dies in an apparent random shooting, the townspeople fear walking the streets. It’s up to Fleming to prove these are not motiveless sniper deaths, and she struggles to unearth how the crimes are connected.

Next, Auntie M found one of Templeton’s earlier stand-alones. 1980’s Death is My Neighbor is out of print, so if you become a fan, start searching those used bookstores. Five more stand-alones follow, most published by Hodder and Staughton, and 2001’s Shades of Death is one I scored and read. In this one Templeton takes us to a remote area of Derbyshire, filled with caves, and uses the landscape in this psychological novel filled with suspense.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

DS Tom Ward finds himself in charge of the Peak District investigation when the skeleton of an eleven-year old girl is discovered after lying in wait to be found for the last eighteen years. The lapse of time proves a huge stumbling block as he tries to work his way back in time to discover who would have wanted such a young child to die. His route is filled with folklore, suicide, and more death, and peppered with the appearance of a beautiful young widow Ward refuses to believe is involved. But is his attraction blinding him to reality?

This thriller goes beyond the usual police procedural in its deft style and taut plot. I’ll be looking for some of Templeton’s back list for the other stand-alones, and am scurrying to find the next to Fleming novels: Dead in the Water and Cradle to Grave. Good luck on your own hunt. These will not disappoint.

Summer Two-fers: Martin Edwards Lake District Mysteries Sunday, Jul 24 2011 

Martin Edwards is the author of the popular Harry Devlin novels, but his Lake District series is one I follow as my Nora Tierney novel-in-progress, working title THE GREEN REMAINS, is also set in Cumbria–just a tad of shameless self-promotion there.

The Serpent Pool follows Cold Case Squad’s DCI Hannah Scarlett as she investigates whether the seven year-old death of young Bethany Friend was accidental or a murder. Drowning in the shallow waters of the Perpent Pool in an isolated area up in the fells suicide had been the accepted the theory for years until Hannah gets her hands on the case, determined to find the truth for Hannah’s dying mum.

Hannah’s personal problems threaten to outshadow her investigation. Her relationship with bookshop owner Marc Amos is becoming unhinged, even as they work on a home they’ve purchased together near the Serpent Pool. At work, she is handed a new sergeant to work with, but the man brings a history of being a trouble-maker.

Hannah meets Louise Kind, sister of the historian Daniel Kind we’ve met in previously in this series. Louise has just struck her lover with a knife in an embarrassing breakup. This leads to a string of horrific murders, the involvement of serious book collectors, and Daniel’s own work on a book about 19th-century English writer Thomas De Quincey, the brilliant but opium-addicted author whose obsessions seem to be echoed in the secrets Hannah and Daniel uncover.

The next in this series is The Hanging Wood. Orla Payne returns to the Lake District and taken a job in a residential library where Daniel Kind researches and works. With his prompting, she tried to interest Hannah in unraveling the truth about the disappearance of her brother twenty years ago. At the time the teenaged Callum Hinds went missing, his uncle was suspected of harming the boy, and hanged himself after being questioned by the police. His suicide was accepted as a confession, but Orla has never believed in his guilt.

Then Orla dies in a shocking and horrific way, and Hannah becomes determined to find the truth about her death–and Callum’s. Hannah’s personal life remains as screwed up as usual, so don’t expect any resolution on that end yet, and indeed in this kind of series, these things are approached slowly.

These novels hang together on the strength of Hannah and Daniel’s characters and they progression–or lack of it, for varied reasons–on their personal relationship. My only complaint is that the copies I’ve read were both published in the US by Poisoned Pen Press, and lately their books have contained an unreasonable number of typo’s that I find extremely distracting when reading. So if you can possibly find a good used reading copy of the original UK printings, you’ll be ahead of the game.

Guest Blogger Esri Allbritten: Plot Holes on the Writing Road Sunday, Jul 17 2011 

                                                                                                                                                      Plot Holes on the Writing Road

[Note: I’m coming at this from the perspective of writing mysteries, where plot is king, but this applies to all stories.]

My husband and I recently watched an Inspector Lewis episode on Masterpiece Mystery (Episode title: Expiation). I won’t go through the entire, terrifically convoluted plot, but here’s the part that gave us problems. A man finds out that when his wife was a little girl, she had a moment of insanity and killed her infant brother rather horrifically. She’s grown up and apparently normal now, but when the man finds out about her past, he worries that she’ll harm their two kids. However, he still loves her and doesn’t want to hurt her, so he manipulates her into a romance with a friend. She obligingly leaves the husband and marries the friend. That’s all fine, except that the kids go with her. Wait, didn’t the first husband push her away because he was worried about the kids? Plot hole.

This was one hitch in an otherwise satisfying plot, but it deflated our suspended disbelief with an audible hiss. When characters in a story behave in a nonsensical way, they don’t feel real.

I’ve found that the best way to detect plot holes is by listening to my overworked inner voice. Are you making any of the following excuses?

The events in my book take place over a long period of time, so it’s natural that the details are a little fuzzy. (A book plot is not a memory. It’s a narrative of events, and the details should all be there and all make sense.)

It’s not acting out of character if the character changes. People change over time. The readers will understand that. (Not unless you map out the reasons for your character’s change. If you don’t, your character has become a mere plot device, and not a very good one.)

There’s so much great stuff going on in my plot, the reader won’t notice this one little problem. (My husband and I did. Your readers are the same people who leave comments on IMDB like, “In the bar scene, the knot on Simon’s tie changes size.”)

When the action takes place, the reader won’t have enough information to know that it doesn’t quite make sense. (Bad author. No biscuit.)

Plot holes happen. You’re writing away, secure in your outline, when you discover that lawyers don’t have access to certain files. A DUI conviction keeps someone from driving for longer than you thought. Your character needs to have been in a certain military action but is then too old to bear a child. You won’t know about a lot of details until you’re well into your first draft. Ideally, you want a fix that doesn’t require a big rewrite. Here are a couple of methods I’ve used successfully.

Give two characters a shared past that makes sense of the problematic plot point. This back story doesn’t have to be integral to the central plot, and you can keep it secret until it’s convenient to trot it out.

Add a character. If it doesn’t make sense for your existing characters to do something necessary to the plot, give the action to someone new. The nice thing is, characters can be introduced at any point in the story. I had an expedient new character suddenly take center stage and add a tremendous amount to the book.

Add another secret. In the Inspector Lewis plot I described earlier, the author could have had the husband suspect that the kids were fathered by someone else. In that scenario, he wants to avoid the trauma of seeing them hurt, but doesn’t feel as compelled to protect them. After all, his worries might come to nothing. He doesn’t want to take his wife’s children away on a mere suspicion, he just doesn’t want to be involved.

Change your villain. In a mystery, your reader doesn’t know who the murderer is until the story’s end (you hope). If you have a great plot but one of the key points doesn’t quite work, give the gun/pillow/poison to someone else. I’ve done this twice, and couldn’t believe what an easy fix it was. After all, each of your suspects should have some reason to kill the victim, in order to provide red herrings. Until you reveal everything at the end, it could be any of them. Use that to your advantage.

A rich, complex plot is satisfying to the reader, but it’s also more work. Review your plot periodically while you’re writing. Be flexible. This kind of quality control is part of being a good writer. Your readers will notice and appreciate it.

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Esri Allbritten is the author of Chihuahua of the Baskervilles, published by St. Martin’s Press/Minotaur Books  and available in hardback and ebook.   

Tripping Magazine is a low-budget travel rag that covers destinations of paranormal interest. The problem is, every time the staff tries to cover a supposedly supernatural event, there’s a crime behind it (think Scooby Doo for adults). In Chihuahua of the Baskervilles, the staff of Tripping Magazine hears about a ghostly Chihuahua seen by Charlotte Baskerville. Charlotte is the rich founder of Petey’s Closet, a clothing catalog for small dogs. Editor Angus MacGregor, photographer Suki Oota, and writer Michael Abernathy travel to Manitou Springs, where the ghost howls advice and spells out threats in tiny paw prints. But is the glowing apparition really Petey’s ghost, or is someone in Charlotte’s household trying to teach a dead dog new tricks – like murder? It’s up to Tripping Magazine to save Charlotte Baskerville, preferably without losing the story.

Visit EsriAllbritten.com to read an excerpt of Chihuahua of the Baskervilles.

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